Monday, September 12, 2011

Revised Haiku Poem




4 comments:

  1. Pretty crazy octopus photo. Did you do it in Photoshop?

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  2. I like your use of scale, it makes the poem easy to read and more interesting.

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  3. yeah photoshop and some illustrator hah

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  4. Your font scaling is creative and makes the reader more attentive. I'm not sure your colors totally support the poem- keywords like "hot" and "blooming" are a bit under-played. Your palette is very calm and the poem has a lot of energy.

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